Saturday, August 15, 2009

Note for a Secret Admirer: Betrayal of the Eyes

Now, you might want to be more
discreet,
for I see your shine
behind the silky haze of your eyes,
ripples pushing the boundary of
your all-seeing gaze on my imagination,
my thoughts, my feelings, as if
each night in your bed,
they sleep.

P.S.:After much reviewing and editing, finally!

2 comments:

Anonymous_X said...

Don't review. Don't edit. Let the words flow naturally. =)

Nice poems, though.

a_x

mrdes said...

=)