Now, you might want to be more
discreet,
for I see your shine
behind the silky haze of your eyes,
ripples pushing the boundary of
your all-seeing gaze on my imagination,
my thoughts, my feelings, as if
each night in your bed,
they sleep.
P.S.:After much reviewing and editing, finally!
1 comment:
Don't review. Don't edit. Let the words flow naturally. =)
Nice poems, though.
a_x
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